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December 26, 2007
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Critique:
The mug looks off-kilter. It looks like a leaning cylinder, because the sides are not perpendicular to the base.
The neck looks too thick, and the left shoulder is smaller than the right one, so I suggest using a human reference image to work out proportions in this regard.
The pencil strokes are clearly visible, especially in the background, and are jarringly all in different directions. The pencil work should be more lightly applied, and either in one direction, or in a spiral-motion to leave no marks at all.
The tone could be made more 3 dimensional by adding other colours. e.g. for the green areas, blue to add shade, and yellow to add tint.
Here's some tutorials I found that might be helpful, since I'm not much of a pencil colourist myself:
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Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
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anyway! it's still a great idea- just the technical side could do with some tweaking. great!
thanks
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Awesome as always dude. Your colouring skills will be consumed by me in due time..
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